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Nothing

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Literature Text

I am nothing
Whisper on the wind
Echo of the past
Cry of the present
Scream of the future
I won't be heard.
This is yet another poem from me. Please comment and enjoy.

Questions (please take your time to answer):
Is this poem too short?
What does it make you think or feel?
Do the four "vocal" verbs have a good effect when used together like this?

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mychem-totheend's avatar
it's not too short.
it's perfect this way, simple and lovely.